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[Stick Slayer vs Xiao Xiao]

Ugh, don't you get it at all, reviewers???

Ben even says it's a stick movie! Pay attention, morons!

[Xiao Xiao]

Good for a first attempt.

SOme of these reviewers are total jerks. Thay just do not seem to get that this is a first attempt, so do not listen to them. I think it's pretty good for a first attempt, but try to make the movements a little more fluid.

[Tai Die]

Umm...

O.O??? Erm... Try to clean up your animation and look at my tips o Dragon Ball Stick. It will help. Trust me.

[Stick It]

Better than Dragon Ball Stick

But you need to try to improve the animations. Look at my tips on my review on Dragon Ball Stick. Maybe that will aid you.

[dragon ball stick]

Uhm...

Erm. No offense, but this wasn't good. But, since this is your first movie, I won't give you the "OMG NOOB BLAM THIZ CRAP LOL HAXORZ U SUCK" treatment. Here are some tips to help you in the future:
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Look at some stick tutorials (I found sweet ones, such as the Ultimate Stick Tutorial and TheExtreme Stick Tutorial)
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Add backgrounds (All decent to great videos have backgrounds... unless I'm mistaken that some don't.)
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Use onion skins and be careful of where you put your items (onion skinning is a great way to make fluid animations)
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Use symbols (To convert something to a symbol, press F8)
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On those symbols (if they are blasts) add a filter to them, such as a glow effect or a blur effect. That really helps.
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Use the line tool, it's better for making stick figure animations.
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-----------------------------------Sp end more time on the video (Good videos are made by people spending countless hours/days/months/years on it - devotion is key)
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And finally: Try your best and be patient.
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That's pretty much it. Use my advice to make better stick movies in the future, and maybe, just maybe, you will have better votes.

That's all from me. Oh, and one more thing. Check out my new movie coming out sometime in the future. I'm working on it really hard, and I'm proud of my work on it so far.

This is SSJ3-Goku4567, and I am done with this review.
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[Dragon Ball Z Parody Ep.1]

driod-tron, calm down.

It's meant to be funny, and it is funny! Hey, Black Trunks is gangsta, unlike his overdramatic counterpart.

[sonic and other madness 3]

...huh?

Umm... It was cool... but at the same time, it was....... odd

[DragonballZ - TLE]

Anyone who thinks this is stupid is stupid.

This was cool! I can seriously see Vegeta doing that.

[Tribute-To-Dragonballz-]

Nice tribute.

Love the drawings. I don't mind the music much. I mean, Toriyama WAS japanese, was he not? Anywyas, very nice of you to do this tribute to him.

[Learn it - Sprite Movie]

Wow, this is really helpful!

I could really learn to make a good sprite movie from this tutorial. Thanks very much, HyperDoom!!!